Nate Hesser
Questions:
1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
I really liked the points you made, and it was really well written. The point of view is not really that clear to me, though, because I didnt see the issue or opposition to the side. It all seamed to be facts about teen not getting enough sleep.I didnt really see an opinion, it was all facts. Good facts though!
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
You did a good job stateing the problem, but there was not really a solution to it that you addressed.
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
I didn't really see any counter arguments, because I could'nt really see any opinion.
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
The article itself was well written and very intersting. You had a lot of good facts, and did a nice job with tieing them all together to form your article.
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
The paragraphs were organized well, and you did a nice job starting the article off, with good facts.
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
I could exactly tell what the thesis was, but each paragraph supported the idea that teens do not get enough sleep, and you did a nice jo of telling us why.
7. Is the writing clear?
The writing was very clear. I could understand averything you were saying and it was formated very nicely. I could understand what you were trying to say throughout the whole thing. Nice job!