Carly Booth
Questions:
1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes -- against abortion
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes -- you made it clear that abortion is wrong, and that women who have abortions should be treated as murderers.
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Yes -- You did a good job with telling about what others will argue is right about abortion, then giving really good reasons why that is wrong.
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
I thought it was very intersesting. I agreed with your side, and you even made some new points that I had never thought of before. You had good facts tied in, which made you argument stronger. The whole thing was very strong and I could hear your voice in it.
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes -- they were well done, with each adressing a part of the issue completely, then moving on. You also started with a nice intro, and at the end ended it well with a good conclusion, always reminding of why abortion is wrong.
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes -- Each paragraph told what others think, then you tied it back to your thesis of why it is wrong, and did so very well.
7. Is the writing clear?
Yes -- the writing is very clear. You got to the point and made it, yet you had a lot of good information about everything in it. I liked your voice and it made me want to read on to see what you felt about other peoples arguments.