Anaina Martin Peer edit:

~ More detail could be used when you talk about your high school expeirience. What have you done in high school? What are some of the memories you will take with you?

~ I thought all the sources were good. You had some college age and some younger and still some the same age as you. It's a nice variety! I also really like your lead. It made me want to read more, and I could connect with it, because my cousins and I used to do similar things.

~ The first 450 words do have a good scene of you and your cousins setting up for battle. I liked it. It worked well to lead into the rest of your story.

~Since you've already finished it, there is not much to add. I love the way you ended it. You could possibly add some more reasons of why you feel the way you do. Are you nervous for college, and why?
nice job with the whole thing. It really all ties together nicely.